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Transformers: Burning Fury - Episode 12TRANSFORMERS BURNING FURYEpisode 12: Expecting the UnexpectedNext day, at Amy's house, Amy's playing in the garden with her pet - a male chocolate Labrador.Amy: Fetch 'Ole'! *throws the ball down the garden*Ole: *runs aheads of the ball then turns and jumps, catching the ball in his mouth, then runs back to Amy*Amy: *bends down, takes the ball and stroke his head* Good boy. Old: *wags his tail happily*Amy's mother: *from inside the house* Amy, honey, it’s lunch time!Amy: Coming, Mum! *heads back inside, with Ole following**elsewhere, a silhouetted man observes this, from inside an SUV*???: Let's not botch this up, gentlemen. Our boss wishes for some results - and we always provide them for her...Inside, Amy's Mum was putting some sandwiches on a plate, while her father sits at the table, reading the newspaper while humming, as Ole walks to his basket and lays in it.Amy's mother: 'David', can you check the fridge for any orange juice?David: Sure thing, 'Sherry'. *ge
Transformers: Burning Fury - Episode 11TRANSFORMERS BURNING FURYEpisode 11: Held at bayThe next day, Amy was doing from cleaning in the garage, sorting the mess out, while a radio plays 'The Touch' by Stan Bush - whilst Freddy reads a magazine, taking a break from helping Amy.Amy: *humming* You got the touch, you got the poweeeerrr! Oh man, I love that guy - and the song!Freddy: *overhears this, then looks at her* Who, you mean me? Amy: No, Stan Bush, silly ^^Freddy: Oh. *gets back to reading, then quietly whispers* Someday, Freddy...Amy: *finishes by put a tool up on the top shelf* There.Just then the, news comes up, stopping the music.Reporter: *on the radio* We interupt the top 10 music, to bring you this breaking news!Amy: And thus, the news ruin my day, again.
Transformers: Burning Fury - Episode 10TRANSFORMERS BURNING FURYEpisode 10: Have I got a StoryAt the Ark, Jazz is currently in vehicle mode, whilst Freddy checks his wheels, fixing them up.Freddy: There, is that better, Jazz?Jazz: Yeah. All things considered, you did a pretty amazin' job, my man. That there wheel was aching for weeks on end!Freddy: Well, you should have no problem with it now.Gemma watches from the side, smiling.Gemma: *narration* It amazing how quick they get on, ever since Orion officially appointed Jazz as Freddy's Guardian. Clearly, Freddy can see Jazz's Wheel problems – Heck, even problems with Ironhide.Ironhide: *hitting a punching bag* I don't know how Freddy does it. Honestly, I don't! That right arm of mine always used to ache while I kept hitting this thing – And, now...Freddy: When you're in vehicle mode, the kinks are easier for me to find. Just take care of yourself, Ironhide, and you'll be fineMelita walks in, with Amy sitting on her shoulder.Jazz: Hey, Melita. Ah'm gues